I think this all kind of depends on what the pov is. Is it third-person omniscient? First-person alternating? Or just plain-old first-person?...
I think I may be experiencing the same problem as Lilith Moon in this previous thread: https://www.writingforums.org/showthread.php?t=50230...
Great advice! Now if I could just implement it... I was riding on this mentality for quite a while with my novel, but when I realized I didn't...
I think these writers should be given credit for at least for knowing what makes people tick. The writing itself may be more than sub par, but...
I agree. Writing is about creating illusions, but if the reader sees the workings behind it, it may fail.
This post made me think about a website I found a while back which "uses a simplified version of an algorithm... to predict the gender of an...
The wise and silent type who, when he does open his mouth, scalds everyone with his wit!
Thank you for the response. I basically am writing third person with alternating perspectives, however. Let me be more specific. Occasionally...
You know, I never even saw this comment until today because in the upper right corner of my blog it still says "0 comments" for some reason....
Help! What are people's opinions about whether there can be something in between third person limited and third person omniscient or whether a...
I absolutely agree. If the story was written exactly as it would have been if it were written in first person, than you might as well just...
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