I think you should go with this. A few notes. Depending on the level of depth you want, you may want to rethink your adversaries. If it's...
Long hair, NOT an emo fringe... The character could keep themselves sideways, avoiding direct eye contact... That action could add to the mystery.
Howdy, name's Aaron. I'm a relatively young writer from the midwest, the heart of mediocrity. I'm trying to filter through all the ideas I've...
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