This story's just six words long. This story's just six words long. This story's just six words long. Six words long. Couldn't think of any words. No I never wrote the words. You've gotta write so many words. To do it right child. Credit to Weird Al Yankovic Seriously though- Goodbye. Click. Click. Click. Bang. SILENCE.
This one is interesting because it can be chilling in different ways if the words are in a different order. How about: Three small children. Shotgun. Happy father. What do you think?
True. If you go along with a story having a beginning, middle and end, even when only six words, they both have very different meanings. Mine represents shock, an accident, and yours implies the father is happy now that the children have been shot. What do you think?