Hello, I am writing an episode for a web cartoon I am creating. In said episode, I heavily reference the Ghost Train fire (Google it). I want to ensure I am portraying this event as sensitively as possible. In addition, I want to make sure this episode is appropriate for tweens/teens, and get markers on pacing, etc. [ link deleted by moderator]
Is there a question here? We've deleted your link to the script. Anything you'd like to have critiqued has to be posted in the Workshop, and only after you've given two thorough critiques of other members, work.
